A haiku by Yumi's mother: ホテルの灯 迷い蛍の 一人旅

Did you know Yumi's mother is a haiku poet? Makoto+ Shogun members, click here for today's haiku with sound and almost 100 other haiku lessons. (Not yet a member, let's fix that!)

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Haiku lesson



That's right. Yumi's mother loves to write haiku. She has won contests for her haiku too. Makoto+ Shogun (or Lifetime) members, click here for this haiku with sound.

Let's get right to it.


ホテルの灯 迷い蛍の 一人旅

hoteru no hi / mayoi hotaru no / hitori tabi
Hotel lights | a stray firefly | travelling alone



  • ホテルの灯 lights of the hotel [ホテル (hotel) + の (of; modifier) + 灯【ひ】 (light; lamp; torch)]
  • 迷い蛍 stray firefly [迷い【まよい】 (stray; lost) + 蛍【ほたる】 (firefly; lightning bug; glowworm)]
  • の of (modifier)
  • 一人旅 travelling alone; solitary journey [一 (one) + 人 (person) + 旅【たび】 (travel; trip; journey)]


The scene is a lonely country town. The lights of a hotel are on. A lone firefly is softly flying by. It looks as if it is lost and traveling alone.



This is probably the lights of an outside sign marking a hotel. With the 一人旅 you might feel a weary traveler has finally found a place to rest, but that traveler is a firefly.



The 蛍【ほたる】 (firefly; lightning bug) is lost, wandering around all by itself (一人旅). The poet perhaps also feels lost and wandering in search of a place to rest.


Pay attention to how kanji are constructed, and come up with real or imagined stories to tie that kanji to its meaning.

For example, 蛍 is a bug 虫 that emits light (the lines at top).

Another example: 灯 is a light or lamp. It is a picture of a fire lamp 火 hanging from a hook 丁.


This haiku was spotlighted in Makoto #40 and Yumi's mother was absolutely thrilled to have her haiku printed in an "international" magazine. Would you be interested in reading more by her? Hit reply and let me know.


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Thank you,
Clay & Yumi